Age/Gender: 15, Male
Location: Somerset, Land of Farms.
Job: Student.
I am the subterranean homesick alien.
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Whistle Status: Garbage
Exp. Points: 1,150 / 1,350
Exp. Rank #: 31,219
Voting Pow.: 5.29 votes
BBS Posts: 8,059 (8.2 per day)
Flash Reviews: 36
Music Reviews: 2
Trophies: 1
Stickers: 12
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36 Reviews | 4 w/ Responses
It wasn't anything special. There're lots of things like it, so no points for originality.
The music was nothing great either, so little points there.
The drawings weren't great either, and the lines you had drew were VERY rough.
As for the actual animation skills themselves, I'm not going to give you much for that either. The lines were jerky, and the messy way the rubber tool was used wasn't too aesthetically pleasing either.
Overall, it kinda sucked, but I'll give you a few points for effort and that it wasn't a total piece of shit.
Just try smoothing it out next time, delete the WHOLE frame and draw it again smooth. So technically, this wasn't even FBF.
So better luck next time.
Author's Response:
The animation was frame by frame, except for the bg's everything was drawn new.
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I dislike the way you used fanboyism to get a poor sprite movie across the voting stage. It had no story line at all, no humor and anyone who thought there was any is a weeaboo.
edn.
Author's Response:
it didnt need a story line i said it was just to prove to people that naruto cant beat DBZ
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I'm going to be a harsh mutha trucker, but this was pretty good. You get a less than 10 because then you would have to be perfect otherwise.
Things to improve on:
The mouth synching, it wasn't too good, especially on that kid with the glasses. Also, the voice acting was a bit weak, but it's not really a bother.
The drawings and animaiton was a bit poor, but it had some good ideas behind it which make up for it. Try using other tools to get an overall good effect, and if only one background is there, make it a erally good one.
Peace out - Sticky
Author's Response:
I agree with what should have been improved, but I'm just too lazy most of the time and only try to improve from time to time. But if some people enjoy my flashes and the style, then I can't complain. Still, thanks for the 8. :)
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Very nice, but the sounds could have been a little more ambient. I know there's something else in my head I could say about this, but it was Good. Smoothly animated. See you in Brackenwood =p
Author's Response:
Thank you StickyWicky ^^. I've never worked with sounds in flash before so it took me a while to even sync them right. I didn't know that publishing it would fix the problem so I spend a few hours switching the sounds between stream and event in preview mode. -_-
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