Age/Gender: 15, Male
Location: Somerset, Land of Farms.
Job: Student.
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Newgrounds Stats
Whistle Status: Garbage
Exp. Points: 1,150 / 1,350
Exp. Rank #: 31,095
Voting Pow.: 5.29 votes
BBS Posts: 7,971 (8.23 per day)
Flash Reviews: 36
Music Reviews: 2
Trophies: 1
Stickers: 12
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36 Reviews | 4 w/ Responses
It's a nice poster, and it was drawn by the author, so I'll give you points on the art. The script, I'm sure, was very simple. And just links? I expected more from such a high score.
Really, this doesn't need a 4, maybe a low 3. It's just a picture with links, and that's something I can find on MySpace.
But, as nice as it looks, I can't give it a high score. It's links, and a picture.
Good job though, I wish you luck at the Con.
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It wasn't anything special. There're lots of things like it, so no points for originality.
The music was nothing great either, so little points there.
The drawings weren't great either, and the lines you had drew were VERY rough.
As for the actual animation skills themselves, I'm not going to give you much for that either. The lines were jerky, and the messy way the rubber tool was used wasn't too aesthetically pleasing either.
Overall, it kinda sucked, but I'll give you a few points for effort and that it wasn't a total piece of shit.
Just try smoothing it out next time, delete the WHOLE frame and draw it again smooth. So technically, this wasn't even FBF.
So better luck next time.
Author's Response:
The animation was frame by frame, except for the bg's everything was drawn new.
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I dislike the way you used fanboyism to get a poor sprite movie across the voting stage. It had no story line at all, no humor and anyone who thought there was any is a weeaboo.
edn.
Author's Response:
it didnt need a story line i said it was just to prove to people that naruto cant beat DBZ
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Looks like you're one of those kind of artists. I mean the kind that puts lots more effort into the easy bits than the hard bits, because there's really no motivation. I'm sure everyone's done it before, so I'm not going to discourage you from animation, but just keep practising and get something longer.
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"I would give a higher rating"
Because it was really nice, well drawn and animated but you completely ruined the audio because the background music was far too loud. You could barely hear the dialogue, I'm sure if you just took the time to edit this submission and made the background music quieter you would get a much better score :)
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I'm going to be a harsh mutha trucker, but this was pretty good. You get a less than 10 because then you would have to be perfect otherwise.
Things to improve on:
The mouth synching, it wasn't too good, especially on that kid with the glasses. Also, the voice acting was a bit weak, but it's not really a bother.
The drawings and animaiton was a bit poor, but it had some good ideas behind it which make up for it. Try using other tools to get an overall good effect, and if only one background is there, make it a erally good one.
Peace out - Sticky
Author's Response:
I agree with what should have been improved, but I'm just too lazy most of the time and only try to improve from time to time. But if some people enjoy my flashes and the style, then I can't complain. Still, thanks for the 8. :)
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When it first came on, it looked promising. Then it got to the fighting :S
Circles never look good in fights, because the movements look to tweened, no matter what they do. Fighting is a great concept in flash, especially when done FBF, but if not, it's pretty poor.
Some good art on the staffs etc. and I could see the effort put into the whole thing, although not very long. I can imagine it was tedious.
So, nice try, I gave it a 5 for a boost through the portal. Good luck ;)
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Seriously. Number two made me nearly shit myself O-o
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Lemon Demon make good songs, but poorly sung :(
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My mommy shot herself but nevermind! Then whiteman said no sunny d and that was the saddest say of my life =[
PRICELESS!!
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